I enjoyed creating all the sentences.
I found it a bit challenging to making sure all the words makes sense.
My digital learning object shows I am stepping up in blog posts.
Teeth sharp as a knife.
Quickly chasing after all the fish in the lake.
Taniwha sneaks up and, SNAP!
He snaps his jaws and catches
the fish... ''Mmmmm, delicious.''
Water splashes in his face.
Taniwha swims back to shore and
consumes his kill.
Quickly chasing after all the fish in the lake.
Taniwha sneaks up and, SNAP!
He snaps his jaws and catches
the fish... ''Mmmmm, delicious.''
Water splashes in his face.
Taniwha swims back to shore and
consumes his kill.
This is a very good piece of writing it has great describing words James.
ReplyDeleteHi there! My name is Pagyn. I’m from Gisborne Intermediate School.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading about the taniwha and how you described it’s sharp teeth.
I know that taniwha aren’t real but if they were, how would you describe or say how they sneak up on their prey, quietly or loud?
Maybe next time you could try to say what their prey is.
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